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Haiku break

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By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished about a month ago 1 min read
Haiku break
Photo by Lily Miller on Unsplash

I broke Mother Tree

Her Blood drips down Adam’s leaves

Roots sleep to dream death.

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About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  • Jennifer A. G.19 days ago

    Ooo I loved this; it made me feel sort of sad and haunted? Amazing imagery with so few lines.

  • Latisha Jean27 days ago

    Hauntingly beautiful x

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Oooo, I especially loved the last line!

  • Tiffany Gordonabout a month ago

    Phenomenal writing Melly Gold! 💕💪🏾

  • Stephanie J. Bradberryabout a month ago

    I like the way rhyme and alliteration are infused throughout.

  • Deeply touching Sis ❤️

  • Oneg In The Arcticabout a month ago

    Ohhhh this.

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